To know what I am talking about, first read Girl on the train
She is fading away
slowly and slowly
Her face is fading away
bit by bit
I want to etch her on my memory forever
and don’t want to let her go
but seems like she is willing to leave
Am I so bad?
No one wants to stay with me
even in memories
Heyy ,🥺 dont say that !! Those last two lines .. 😕
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Thank you for reading.
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The continuation is beautiful but sad! Good work!
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Thank you.
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Very good poetry!
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Thank you.
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